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Some Things Are Better Left Unknown

Some Things Are Better Left Unknown

A Poem by Whitney Kleinhuizen
"

Forced to a life of unfathomable hells.

"

In full light yet all that you can't see
Is everything inside myself that's slowly killing me

Demons so dark and horrors of the mind
You should feel thankful to be so blind

Trapped among the living in a soul that's already dead
Just a constant stream of suffering, endless in my head

You force me to a life that I long to only end
This battered body broken with wounds that will not mend

Selfish in some ways, as my pain you cannot feel
Believing in hopeful lies that some day all can and will be healed

But as you go about your happy lives, so fulfilling and so great
Alone, I lie awake at night,
Knowing one day, my life I will take

© 2012 Whitney Kleinhuizen


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Wow, this is so dark! I love dark poetry, it has a strange aura that attracts me!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Whitney Kleinhuizen

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm totally the same way :)
Such emotion and strength and honesty. I really appreciated this one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Whitney Kleinhuizen

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Believing in hopeful lies
that some day all can
and will be healed.
Nice write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Whitney Kleinhuizen

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.
no, I see them, too.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful, as always. There is so much emotion in your words, the ending is so tragically beautiful. Continue writing, thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Whitney Kleinhuizen

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
This is so beautifully written, just like all of your other work. I never get enough of your words, you piece things together so wonderfully.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Whitney Kleinhuizen

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Woah! This is intense! Very powerful and relatable. Thank you for writing this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Whitney Kleinhuizen

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
That1Nerd23

7 Years Ago

Anytime!
While ignorance is truly bliss knowledge is a great thing that we all need… totally relate to this piece well done

Posted 7 Years Ago


Whitney Kleinhuizen

7 Years Ago

Thanks!

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Added on October 12, 2012
Last Updated on October 13, 2012
Tags: darkness, demons, mind, death, sadness, suicide, struggle, pain

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Whitney Kleinhuizen
Whitney Kleinhuizen

Portage, MI



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I write out of expression. I don't know all the "rules of writing" and quite honestly don't really care. I write what I know. I write what I feel. I write beyond the eyes. I write from the heart. A.. more..

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