To Me, You Are

To Me, You Are

A Poem by Whitney Kleinhuizen

Not just by chance, it was all meant to be
There is a reason for all, undeniably
What you are and what you mean
are things to you that cannot be seen

 

 

You are the sturdy lighthouse among my raging seas
You are a safe haven and I, a refugee

 

 

You give me a strength that helps me survive
You pull me out of hells and you keep me alive

 

 

Reaching out your hands, you always catch me when I fall
You are the steady handrails, even when I can only crawl

 

 

You are the beacon of light that breaks through my dark
You give me something real and it stills my beating heart

 

 

You are the flowing love that floods my entire soul
You are an inner peace, one that makes me feel whole

 

 

And you are a soothing warmth that helps take away the sting
but you are much more than this, honestly you're my everything

 

 

So will you take me in, deep into your beautiful soul,
and down where your true essence lies, where your worth is more than gold?

© 2013 Whitney Kleinhuizen


Author's Note

Whitney Kleinhuizen
Positive/love type poems are not my usual. Just had inspiration for this.

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Very well written, the rhymes were not typical and the poem has a nice sentiment that flows. Impressive writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Whitney Kleinhuizen

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review :)
Wow dear, this is beautiful. It was amazing to read something so far from your usual. You did a lovely job with this, and I really enjoyed it. Beautiful as always. x

Posted 6 Years Ago


Whitney Kleinhuizen

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) Yeah, definitely far from my 'norm' of writing so wasn't sure how it'd turn out.. read more
Aww. How sweet. I really liked this one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Whitney Kleinhuizen

6 Years Ago

Thanks!! My boyfriend was the entire inspiration for this one :)
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Thought the spacing and stanza separation was strange, but the writing is still clear and potent.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Whitney Kleinhuizen

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Any suggestions on spacing/stanza separation?
well they should be, this was very sweet.. reminds me of how i used to write many experiences ago..

nice to read something so warm and tender sometimes..

Antonio

Posted 6 Years Ago


Whitney Kleinhuizen

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review :)
Antonio Valentino

6 Years Ago

you're very welcome, it was my pleasure.. :)

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Added on January 15, 2013
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Whitney Kleinhuizen
Whitney Kleinhuizen

Portage, MI



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I write out of expression. I don't know all the "rules of writing" and quite honestly don't really care. I write what I know. I write what I feel. I write beyond the eyes. I write from the heart. A.. more..

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