Happy Birthday Dad

Here's a poem I wrote for my father for his birthday. We've been through rough times but I still love him. This poem's for him.

Almost three years have past
And we still managed to last
I want you to know one thing
That we will be everlasting
I know life hasn't treated you well
Put yourself out there and tried to sell
Just me, you, and different girls
Life put is in a big whirl

What I did was pretty low
I saw the pain in your eyes
But you're a proud man and didn't let it show
When you're down, look towards the skies
Chances are I'm looking there
Just know I love you
And leaving home was a lot to bare
And I know it hurt you too

So happy birthday, Dad
And this is me telling you
Don't let life make you sad or mad
I love you

Reviews

[dreamer :)]

That's really, really, really good!! You should give it to your dad for his birthday. I'm POSITIVE it would touch his heart the way it touched mine. Good job!!!

[HPsGurl1]

Oh, this is such a sweet and sad piece! I can imagine how hard it must be to leave someone you love for so long.

100/100