Hard To Say

I actually found three poems from a while , this is one of them

I have been thinking for

many days now,

About where, when and how.

I have looked for my deep belief

and my inner feeling.

I am sorry to say it always ends

with me staring in the ceiling

I have tried hard, as hard as I

can.

I have never thought this would

take such a man.

The oddest thing, it is only words.

When it comes to it, I just

want to fly away with the birds

I promise you I really care

It is just that I do not dare

for all it takes, I wish I was

that brave,

To let out the words, I in my heart save

I have prayed to god the almighty,

It has helped, though only slightly

I want you to know that I am here,

I am just looking for answers, in the atmosphere

Looking at the mood, the stars and the sky,

Oh heaven I wish, my oh my

I promise you one day, I will make sense.

You will see a different me, a me with confidence

You are the one I really obey,

Give me a second and I will say.

I did not realize how hard it was to do,

To say the simple words;

I LOVE YOU

Reviews

[Jazique]

I see not too many errors I can deal with as you wrote in your own style but, over all this was very sweet.Also when you got to here "I am just looking for answers, in the atmosphere
Looking at the mood, the stars and the sky,
Oh heaven I wish, my oh my
I promise you one day, I will make sense.
You will see a different me, a me with confidence
You are the one I really obey,
Give me a second and I will say.
I did not realize how hard it was to do,
To say the simple words;
I LOVE YOU" You writing really started to rhyme like real poetry. You did a marvelous job in description and all describing the people who have a hard time and just need time to say those simple words "I love you". well done and keep up the awesome work.

[Liz]

This is really sweet, and so easy to relate to. Nice work :)

[Closed Account]

Aww, this is so sweet! you really poured your heart out into this.
This is really good! Great job(: