The Climber On The Wall, Out Of Movements He Can Use To Keep Climbing, Falls.

The Climber On The Wall, Out Of Movements He Can Use To Keep Climbing, Falls.

A Poem by The Twin Arenas
"

The fewtch.

"
I hope as my stomach
itches his head
the children aren't poisoned
after eating porkchops
made while a woman was out.

The parsley processed
with the wire.

© 2019 The Twin Arenas


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Just got back on this site and have been scouring through old read requests, admittedly removing most.

However this title caught me, not because of the length though. Was this by chance inspired by a Dungeons and Dragons session? lol

Posted 3 Years Ago


Um... what the hell are you talking about?

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Twin Arenas

5 Years Ago

That's your response to reading something. "Umm what the hell are you talking about?" If it's too .. read more
Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

Yes. That is my response.
Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

… still waiting to "get hurt" as you said. (empty threats are for d*********s)
Read three times, first from start, then from finish plus, a quick scan highlighting the inbetween.. and still afraid to accept the fact: things happen. Reads like a bewildering but somewhat catastrophic cleverly Escher drawing - apparently going somewhere but - left hanging! Perhaps.


Posted 5 Years Ago


emmajoy

5 Years Ago

Have always tried to accept the various views reviewers find when reading my attempts at minor scrib.. read more
The Twin Arenas

5 Years Ago

I've always felt that this site should change the word "reviews" to "replies."
emmajoy

5 Years Ago

As long as its accompanied by a 'thank you for sharing' or similar, it doesn't really matter, does i.. read more

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