True Love

Just a glimpse into a relationship were true love thrives.

Your chest sinks in and out,
As we breathe in unison.
Your body wrapped up in mine,
Pulling me deeper into your grasp.
You whisper in your sleep,
How much you love me.
A smile forms on my face,
Reminding me how much I love you.
The sun infects the room,
Making me hold you tighter.
For I know I will have to let go.
Anxiety builds in my chest,
Then you awake.
You stare deep in to my mind,
Filling every corner of my brain.
Soothing the tension,
Then I know it will be okay.

Author's Note

Open to suggestions

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

good job in bringing this piece together, keep on writing.

[rnuff]

Very lovely poem, awesome write

[C.C. Marx]

great poem...very sweet :)