When I'm with you

When I'm with you

A Poem by Wannabewriter16
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About the love of my life

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I love my body when I'm with you. Its an amazing feeling.
I love you more than anything.
I love your sexy body
I love what it does,
I love its everything.  
I love to feel the muscles
of your body and its bones,and the trembling
-firm-smooth ness and which i will kiss over and over.
I love kissing this and that of you,
I love, slowly stroking the,soft hair on your head
And your eyes big love oceans
and possibly I love the thrill
of you against me so close and tight

© 2018 Wannabewriter16


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Wannabewriter16
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a lovely write on someone close to your heart.

Posted 4 Years Ago


awwwwwwwwwwwwwtasteful ... loverly poem ;) to rejoice in what we have is a wondrous things says i! i think this is simply a delightful poem on love
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


sounds like love to me,enjoyed the read

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wannabewriter16

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading
 wordman

4 Years Ago

you`re welcome my friend
Romantic and revealing.very well written describing details of your heart's desire.
This euphoric feeling only comes from a loving heart

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 10, 2018
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Tags: Poetry, poem, life, teen, love

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Hello my name is Bonnie and I'm 18 years old and I love to write. more..

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