S.I.L.E.N.C.E

S:    Swiftly, Sorrowful Silence Swallowed the Smile

        of her Sickly Son.Sweating and Shaking in his 

        Slumber

 

I:     Insult to Injury Insists It must Insure Impending 

        death to all Innocence In him

 

L:    Like a Leeching Leopard. Leprosy sucks all

       Life, Lost within his Languid muscles. Lamenting

       in the Lake of tears is a Lucid Lesson Lately Learnt.

 

E:   Etched on the Edges of her Exhausted heart are Endless

      Eulogies composed to Ensure Everyone remembers the joy

      that once Emanated from her son in the End

 

N:  Now the Numerous Numbers of his days shall Never again be counted.

      His minutes are Numbered. Nasty is his bed. A Nuisance are his mother's

      Never-ending tears.

 

C:  Curses Caress her Crystalline Crying eyes. The Chronicles of a Causeless Crusade

     begins. Crucial memories Circle her Crushed mind as they play symphonies

     of a Crying Choir's Chorus. This Cold Chapter's Crumpled pages in a Crumbling Codex

     Comes to a Collapsing Close.

 

E:  Energy Exits this once Excellent young man. A furtive quietus Enters 

     leaving no room for doubt. her son's life has come to an Early End.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[paradise]

Wow I really loved this fantastic job!

[Chris Yip]

Well done for an excellent sad poem that plays with the alphabets SILENCE which tie the whole story together in a neat and profound story. Tragedy expressed in poetic words that stress on certain Alphabets one at a time. Ingenius and well presented

[Me]

Great work!

[DreyaArt]

awe this is so sad. where does this come from? I wonder is it based in your own reality, or a reality of a friend? Or perhaps you took mulitple realities to create this beautiful sad piece. Thank you for writing.

[unknown]

Enjoyed this. Like the alliteration you have going on in this poem.

[Alex Vidmar]

I really like this. It's different and very interesting. Well done. This is going in my library.

[Amberway]

This was written very well! Very creative.

[Poe Redd]

Love the way you wrote this poem! And the feeling it gives, sad and.. silent. Nice one!

[EMMIE]

SILENCE! HUSH YO MOUF! LOL THIS IS SO VERY CREATIVE AND IT READS SO SMOOTHLY I CAN DEFINITELY HEAR THIS IN A SPOKEN WORD SESSION...DIMMED LIGHTS...SOFT BEAT BEHIND IT. IT'S WELL CONSTRUCTED AND THE CONCEPT IS RATHER UNIQUE.

[WhiteWillow]

This is a great piece. Loved the uniqueness, and the heartwrenching topic was vividly conveyed. Wonderfully done!