To thee

To thee

A Poem by Warren L.G De Mills
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A quick poem written at a recent poetry seminar open forum. Nothing too special

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Silence is broken

A breath has spawned

Your words were spoken

The day adorned

This heart was shattered

But then reborn

For me you were battered

For belief, I'm scorned

This chance to life

despite this suicide

Opportunity to love

And make all things right

How can I forsake

This God-given light

bestowed upon me

amidst heavens might?

© 2011 Warren L.G De Mills


Author's Note

Warren L.G De Mills
Well just say what comes to mind

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The poem is very good. Short lines with meaning. No wasted words. The statements open the door to questions. A logical ending even if it is a question. I agree each life is a light. A gift to use for good or bad. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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well written, but i must wonder who or what you write for, about?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice classical English pieces in your word use I find... shakespeare like, loved this emotional heartfelt piece, and the ending says it all for you....
it's honest, like i love reading artists! thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice words used for each line throughout this write, I like this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The poem is very good. Short lines with meaning. No wasted words. The statements open the door to questions. A logical ending even if it is a question. I agree each life is a light. A gift to use for good or bad. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I don't know that i agree that its nothing too special - all poetry has value when its from the heart. There are a couple of rhymes that seem a little contrived, but the message is honest and paintful. A good write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I enjoyed reading it and thought you did a good job. That is what came to mind first.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Port -Of Spain, Trinidad and Tobago



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