A Poetic Kiss

A Poetic Kiss

A Poem by The Warrior Poet
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This is a card I made for my wife, Jenniffer

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A Poetic Kiss

 

 

My love for you is more than I could

ever hope to put in words.

(But here are a few for you anyway...)

Your voice, when talking to me, is

the most beautiful sound I’ve heard .

(It doesn’t even matter what you say...)

 

 

I write           these words

    to brighten       your day,  to let

you know how special it is,  to let

you know it’s a calming bliss, just to

    hear you say…      anything,

         (Whether it’s “drive safe” or

     “I love you” or

           “I Do”

 

 

Your voice is a poetic kiss.

 

 

                             For My beautiful Wife,

I Will Love You 4e&4a,

I will always be your loving husband and friend,

 

David L. Carmichael

The Warrior Poet

November 1, 2007

© 2010 The Warrior Poet


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awesome i love the lay out! well done!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a very sweet and loving poem for your wife. I love the heart shape in the middle of the poem. The sincerity of this poem is felt through the whole piece. You have done this in a creative way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


its suprising that how sometimes the most beautiful things need to be conveyed in the simplest of manners.. no gigantic words here...not a lot of metaphors and yet this piece is as beautiful as any other...
a beautiful write written for your wife...i am sure these words are just a mere peep inside the infinite ocean of love that you have for her...
a light piece with a beauty of love!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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OH GOSH! How lovely and romantic..lovely to know that kind of love still exists!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very sweet. I am always glad to see a warrior find peace and contentment with someone they love.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A beautiful and hopeful poem for your wife. A wise man knows when he had something good. Sweet and kind words made the poem a outstanding poem of love. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very powerful, caring, and sweet poem you have here. Glad that love has struck you in such a life changing way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very sweet- and I like how you made the stanza into a heart. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lovely n Sweet. Enjoyable. Shows very genuine affection. Great write..

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is lovely.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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I am a combat veteran paratrooper and I've been writing since 1984. I was chosen by my English teacher as good candidate for Creative Writing and had to get a waiver to get into the class because my .. more..

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