Summer Love

10 words long - Inspired by the given topic of "summer nights"

Summer Love

 

Summer nights so fleeting,

our love is buried in snow.

Author's Note

10 words, how much can I say with 10 words... Unless you love the winter (BLASPHEMY!!!) this simple poem should speak to your heart.

Reviews

[The Warrior Poet]

Looking back on this tidbit, I see the metaphor. Cocaine kills.

[Coyote Poetry]

In 10 words. Real hard to write a strong poem. The word "snow" made me wonder. A interesting poem.
Coyote

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sometimes less is more..

[Pheonix]

nice sweet and simple

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

so much unspoken make themselves apparent through your poignant lines~

[Mark]

This is good, I usually appreciate when poets accept challenges that limit the amount of words or lines. It forces simplicity which is often a good policy.

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a strong poem with the word choices you used. It has a deep meaning.