The Extremely Strange Maniac Killer of Miller Creek RD

The Extremely Strange Maniac Killer of Miller Creek RD

A Poem by WeakFreak

There once was a killer of Miller Creek Road,
Who had big black eyes and cried tears of black blood,
With a face such as stone that never quite moved,
He arms at his sides they always will stay,
He never needed them see?
For to murder his victims he only makes sound,
A sound much like breathing but loud like the grave,
Like a wind chilling whistle on a bleak autumns day,
He would stand in the shadows and make the sound,
They would run away screaming then think themselves safe,
But not a day later they'd drop dead to the floor,
Not a cause could be found,
For it was the Maniac killer of Miller Creek Road,
Then one night a young boy woke up in his room,
Late one night in the autumn glum,
He found the extremely strange killer of Miller Creek road, 
Standing there staring at him,
He looked up at his horrid face,
"I'm not afraid." He said, "Go ahead breath in."
And just like that the killer was gone,
And the extremely strange maniac killer of Miller Creek Road never dared come back again,
There was not one more killing in Miller Creek Road,
Because of that boy who fought a demon,
Who was never there. 

© 2019 WeakFreak


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I think Aurora capped it off brilliantly by mentioning your easy language and great imagery. These are the sort of poems almost everyone can understand, visualize, and appreciate. I really liked it. :)

The only thing I found strange was the Maniac Killer's sudden downfall and disappearance. Didn't seem right for such a sinister and ruthless terrorizer.

Posted 1 Year Ago


WeakFreak

1 Year Ago

yeah, the point was supposed to be that he kind of fed off fear like IT or slender so when the boy w.. read more
I loved the "easy language" that you've used for this poem. The imagery is great. So it's a beautiful poem. You've got a unique style.
Keep it up!
And Good Luck!

Posted 1 Year Ago


WeakFreak

1 Year Ago

thank you very much
I just got into writing and this was the first thing I came across and I must say your style of writing seems pretty unique. I liked the way you put it across :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


WeakFreak

1 Year Ago

thanks, this is actually a bit different from most my stuff
le_penseur

1 Year Ago

Will go through the rest of then too.

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Added on September 11, 2018
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WeakFreak
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I'm kind of odd, and kind of normal, I'm good at faking things and I like writing cause I can tell the truth and no one thinks anything of it cause to them it's just a poem, or just a story. And maybe.. more..

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