The World Full of Sorrow

The World Full of Sorrow

A Poem by Jim.Wednesday
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Nevertheless it's not hopeless for us...

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The world is so cruel,
People so helpless...
There's no one to fuel our hearts,
It's so careless...
 
Fates are so chainful,
Even though we have lust...
Ardour's so painful,
Because we have no trust!
 
Streets feel like nightmare,
When I walk down the road...
I long to fight with
One's not kissing the rod...
 
"Where are we going?"
I just can't hold my scream!
Can't take this phoney
Land, that is deemed!
 
My Lord, just hear me!
I pray for their lifes!
Please answer my feelings,
Don't let them to dice...
 
And maybe someday
This world full of sorrow
Will meet one clear,
Deceptionless morning...

© 2010 Jim.Wednesday


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Jim.Wednesday
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There's a lot of despair in the lines and a clear intent on how to resolve the problems in the verse...

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Added on December 6, 2010
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Jim.Wednesday
Jim.Wednesday

Vilnius, Lithuania



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I am a young musian, guitarist, vocalist and song writer. I also write poems, when I have free time. I want to try my strength writing a novel sometime :) Besides, I have a lot of other hobbies, like .. more..

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