Veil

Veil

A Poem by YouoweYoupay
"

Calm your soul..

"

C alm your soul

Learn from the dawn

Tranquility and faith

The world slowly

Opens its petals;

Pink and blue tinted in graceful gray

And the world sees 

The tiny diamonds in your eyelashes

So be calm ...

Don't cry,

For the kindness within you

Will make you disappear

All creation will breathe a veil of mist

And you will be saved

© 2018 YouoweYoupay


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YouoweYoupay
Hi. Thanks for reading.

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When I get stressed or my heart races towards a panic attack, I often take to reading something soothing.
This is the sort of thing I would read when I needed to calm and settle myself, and I think it would definietly do the trick. It seems very abstract, so I think one could derive from it the meaning needed in the moment.

I’m glad to have read it!



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YouoweYoupay

1 Year Ago

Anxiety and panic attacks are awful.. I don't wish them for anyone! It makes me happy to know my poe.. read more
H L Rose

1 Year Ago

Of course!



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Rye
This is so good and very truthful. Like the lesson involved in this.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Hello, I'm finally back on this website again. Sorry for the long delay.
Just reading this poem itself makes me feel calm and serene.
"And the world sees

The tiny diamonds in your eyelashes

So be calm ..."
Reading these lines reminds me of that saying "Laugh and the whole world laughs with you, weep and you weep alone". It's interesting how our darkest moments can reveal to us who our true friends are. Thanks for writing this!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Almost a poetical song of salvation - soft and gentle stanzas make the reader feel calm and relaxed - nice write! :-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


How calming and serene... I love this poem.....thank you for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


I really needed this today

Thank you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soothing, relaxing and assuring. A spiritual gem indeed. Thank you for sharing with us.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soft, tender and wonderful use of words. I liked the deep thoughts leading to the proper ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


so mental and at the same time reassuring. it is what it describes and comforting to read. and YoYp, glad to meet you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


It's as though the voice of God himself has spoken. I feel cleansed and my soul is free...stirring read!

Posted 1 Year Ago


If someone read this to me every day, I'd be a lot more relaxed I think. Nice image to go with the poem. It almost feels like it sprung unbidden from the aether in response to the words you wrote. Very nicely done!

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on February 23, 2018
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