Hazel and Honey

Hazel and Honey

A Poem by YouoweYoupay
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It was love at first sight.

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Hazel and Honey

 

 

 

It was love at first sight,

 

I grinned. She was glowing in her golden robes, waiting at the door.

 

We wasted no time in introductions or petty talk, our names already introduced.

 

I would call her Black Beauty

And she would call me Yearning Green Eyes.

 

The arousing silence only spoke, drawing me to her. Into her.

 

The catwalk in my occasionally worn bright red high heels had never sounded so graceful.

 

As I made my way to the Sugar Goddess quietly folded on my coffee table.

 

I tested the back of my fingers along her fine, flawless preface features.

 

The glass in her eyes reflected my leisure yet eagerness, the straps of gold lined against her skin, firmly holding her touchable edible contents, in the robes of gold.

 

I leaned to lick her lips,

The luxurious cocoa scent,

Released in the air around her consuming my patience,

 

Slightly vexed about the minute frittered over untying

 

Her trim, tight lace surrounding her waist,

 

I began to wonder why they brought her to me with clothes on. 

 

Clothes became such a bother.

 

They printed, yet censored her splendor.

 

The glittering gold crunched and unwrapped, stroking her skin once as it fell apart.

 

I sincerely admired the luscious almond sprinkled curved coat,

 

And I impatiently clamped her lips into mine,

 

My moan released in a defeated sigh,

 

As the perfectly measured sugar and cream swirled in my tongue, melting, wonderfully complimented with the crisps of almond, honey, and hazelnut the kind, heated sensation pleasing my tastes buds.

 

I wanted more...but Mama had originally kept her for the soon arriving guests.

 

Such a waste...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2011 YouoweYoupay


Author's Note

YouoweYoupay
Baahaaaa! Fooled you didn't I ?

Once again, the chocolate lover trick has been inspired by a wonderful writer nicknamed: Bubo. But I did not steal her idea! Mine and hers are completely different...mines are guest chocolates *cough* Well, anyway comments and reviews are appreciated.

Image (1): Pretty as the Snow
by *AmberSea
Link: http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=pretty+girl#/d16z1vb

Image (2): I love Chocolate
by ~ch3rrycreamshaken
Link: http://ch3rrycreamshaken.deviantart.com/art/I-love-chocolate-43516248?q=boost%3Apopular%20chocolate%20nuts&qo=4

Check out both artists' works, they're awesome. :)

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Hahahaha!:) Wow! This was fabulous, Wella!! Had my heart racing as I licked my lips, trying not to slobber everywhere as I read. In all my life I has never craved chocolate as much as I do right now. And with almonds! Yummy, yummy! This is an utterly delicious read, every word was pure seduction and ended with a hint of your humor. And yes, I was completely fooled.:) In fact, this was so hot the way you had written it, that this could pass as erotic.:) So good!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Cool poem..Love these delicacies , love the way you described em..Well done, dear.

Posted 13 Years Ago


really great idea very beautiful

Posted 13 Years Ago


I first thought hazel and honey were the color of the eyes. Beautiful however unbalanced it may be. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lol

I printed this poem out (and since I dont know your real name, I gave you credit under the name You_Owe_You_Pay) and gave it to my English teacher and she was like "O___O IS THIS CHILD APPROPRIATE?!" and I was like "Yes :D" and then she read the end and was like "Oooooohhhh". XD

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very cleverly done. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


such a sweet piece, nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a twist. You did fool me. Unique idea.

Posted 13 Years Ago


At first i thought this would be a typial soppy poem, i knew i was wrong when i was laughing like a fool at the end, nice trick!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was a good one! Had me fooled till the last bit. I have yet to try this type of writing but i applaud your efforts on this piece. You really swept the rug from underneath me at the end...and that doesnt happen alot so pat yourself on the back. Very entertaining...still smiling as i finish this review! XD

Posted 13 Years Ago


You fooled me with this writing. You did an amazing job writing this poem, and the picture really helped to enhance what you were talking about in the poem. Well that was before you fooled me. I couldn't help but laugh at this poem. I do have a concern though. The two images are attributed to other artists, but you don't mention if you have permission to use their images. Always be careful with this. I liked how you used the font for the poem as well. Great job here except for the one concern I have.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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