Borders [Teaser]

Borders [Teaser]

A Chapter by YouoweYoupay
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My sister's eyes almost popped out and I wished I could vanish right where I stood.

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Chapter (13): Borders [Teaser]

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This can't be right. We did not arrive here just to be concealed in the dark, like double-crossing rats. I bowed to catch my breath. The three girls stood behind in the dark alley also exhausted from suddenly running that fast. I frowned deeper so that he might notice and direct his eyes properly at me, "I shouldn’t have listened to you! We shouldn’t have run like that and left the car behind!" I almost spat,

 

"Keep your voice down." his baby blue eyes frowned back.

 

"Jad, the...these men were chasing us like crazy!" Aseel said in between the exhales, trying to maintain the jumpy tenor of her voice, Adam slightly opened his mouth to protest back. Suddenly it flashed across my mind.

 

"The pass cards.." My head jolted, "I forgot them in the pocket of the backseat." I walked past him, but Adam's hand clasped my left arm.

 

"They're still near by. You know you can't go ba--" "No, I don't." I tried to yank my arm off his grip… still trying,   "That woman promised she'd grant us permission to cross the borders, and without the pass cards, we won't pass. Let go!"

 

He did the opposite, easily pinning me in between the dark passage wall and his torso, "You're too troublesome and too loud." He whispered tilting his head and diving closer with no permissions, sopping up the remaining bits of my breath and I melted in his heat amidst the bitter cold. Aseel's face turned scarlet, and my sister's eyes almost popped out. I wished I could vanish or instantly erase their memories. At least the former mermaid didn't understand…

 



© 2011 YouoweYoupay


Author's Note

YouoweYoupay
Full chapter will be released in the coming few days. Comments and positive feedback is appreciated.

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I like how short and quick the chapter was. It added real power to it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hurry! Where's the rest of it?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw! Hurry up and write the full chapter already. Sheesh.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great teaser.

Matthew

On a side, I didn't change anything. Just might not of been in the mood to read something like that the first time.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think, actually, I know I'm going to love this. I'm already addicted, great little bit to engage one's curiousity. Can't what for the rest. ~ BlackClk0ud

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love it. I want to read more! Lovely. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I would lije to read more of this. Good teaser. You leave us wanting more.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A interesting short chapter. I had to re-read the complete story. You have create a powerful story. I look forward to see what direction you will go with the story. Thank you for sharing.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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