Fools Game

Fools Game

A Story by Enigma
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I was in the process of continuing "Angel Of Death" and didn't think the background idea I had in mind fit.. so I quickly rearranged a lot and transformed it into this.. I really like it so far.

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“Are you f*****g kidding me? S**t, are you even hearing me right now? I swear on my life when I get out I’m going to report your sorry a*s to the authorities and have you killed.. “

“You swear on your life..? YOU of all people… Swearing on your own life…”

I snorted, uncrossing my arms with a light smirk.

 “Well damn…” I lifted her chin slowly letting our eyes meet, giving her a devilish grin.

“Darling… You can’t swear on something you no long own.” I grinned.

When someone swore on their own life was like a sweet game for me. It was sickening but it was fun to think about for the most part… Because I decided life or death for her.

 She didn’t believe a word I had said. Which I didn’t mind too much but it just meant she wasn’t going to help me like I planned… Which isn’t what I wanted.

Letting my eye slowly fade to their naturally pale color I looked almost blind as I watched her begin to shiver and tremble, unable to make a sound. I watched her quietly seeing the struggle she put up, still trying to rip the rope from around her hands

Muttering to myself I let my eyes wander the warehouse quietly, throwing my bag over my shoulders I stood and placed a smooth cigarette on my lips with ease, the pale dense black smoke trailing the inside of my lungs, degrading their beautiful structure into something horrid.

I loved thinking about it… How black and weak my lungs were getting… But of course, it

was being interrupted. I listened to the struggling of my new hostage in the distance and the foul language she used.

“I swear… I’m going to rip your throat out, after I kill you if you don’t f*****g untie me… I’m going to take that metal pole and shove it up your. . .” She continued with a snarled voice, clenching her teeth as she tried to wiggle loose once again.

She managed to pick a fight with the devil… For once, I was glad to be the devil in this situation.

                

                

© 2012 Enigma


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Enigma
I'm gonna be adding on to this for sure but.. I hope you enjoyed what I've done so far.

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Please, do add onto this. There is so much more to be done here. It starts a little cryptic - but now I want to know. There is a feeling of casual sadisticness around the 'kidknapper' character - until that end line 'for once, I was glad', which suggests so much more depth.

Very interesting build up the the character more than anything else. Thanks for sharing :)

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I like the title of this and how sadistic this seems to be... it's making me wonder what sort of fowl play is going on... please continue!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Please, do add onto this. There is so much more to be done here. It starts a little cryptic - but now I want to know. There is a feeling of casual sadisticness around the 'kidknapper' character - until that end line 'for once, I was glad', which suggests so much more depth.

Very interesting build up the the character more than anything else. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on July 3, 2012
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Tags: Dark, Mysterious, Romance, Random, Different, Kidnapping, Heist, Awkward, Preview, Devil, Fantasy

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