Excuse Me..

Excuse Me..

A Poem by Luna Zerimar

I just want to take a moment & Make an apology to all.
To all that have encountered
To all that have met
To all that got to know
To all that became a friend
To all that cared

Just let me apologize.
Apologize for a rather late apology.
A pathological liar
I apologize.
I apologize to all.
Reverse the encounters
Reverse the meetings
Reverse the knowing
Reverse the friendships
Reverse the care
I wish I could.
I would.
But I cannot....I'm sorry.

© 2014 Luna Zerimar

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I think we can all relate to this in parts.Nicely done

Posted 7 Years Ago

I loved the honesty and raw emotion here! Truly amazing job!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Impressive poem! The structure is interesting, different, but yet still magically works. questions still hang in the air, and the feelings pour out. Nicely done xxx

Posted 8 Years Ago

I like the structure of your poem. They all are different yet so alike. This is something I can never write. I love it. Great work. x

Posted 8 Years Ago

Jes you speak the truth keep on

Posted 8 Years Ago

I like how you structured this poem... it came across as different thoughts at different intervals yet they all tied in together so it worked.

Nicely done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

this is awesome. I understand his feeling perfectly, and you really nailed it. There is so much emotion and so many unasked questions surrounding this poem, and you have written it really well. I am impressed! Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Jess you have crafted this poem so well, brilliant.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Such a great write! I really like the style and flow! Great Job Jess :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

It's deep and full of emotions.
Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on December 10, 2014
Last Updated on December 10, 2014


Luna Zerimar
Luna Zerimar

Houston, TX

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