Touch Me

Touch Me

A Poem by *~Kristy~*

candle burning Pictures, Images and Photos
Touch me with a candle,
     I'll still feel the burning flame,
Touch me with a knife,
     I'll still feel the searing pain,
Touch me with a spear,
     I'll still bleed all the same,
Touch me with a mirror,
     I'll still appear very plain,
Touch me with money,
     I'll still have little to gain,
Touch me with sickness,
     I'll still stand out in the rain,
Touch me with a cage,
     I'll still go insane,
Touch me with your heart,
     I'll not feel ashamed...

© 2010 *~Kristy~*


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I hate it when a fly gets on my back where I can't reach him with my tail to swat him away. But I love butterflies and that butterfly picture is beautiful. Us bovines don't bother with mirrors too much, but I can sure identify with the cage line! Keep it up, you will be a good writer.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The repetition creates a feeling of quiet seduction while the tone remains steadily intense. Every line seems to be a silent scream filled with ironies. Your message comes off straight and strong even with just a few words.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful. It's touching and relatable, to everybody. Great Job && keep writing =]

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this; the words offer the reader a fantastic imagery of life, and finally how love can change everything.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its good poem, I liked it and for most I liked is the ending of your poem. Well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good. Nice ending, but my favorite part was "Touch me with a cage,
I'll still go insane."

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was flicking through poems, and don't usually review them, but this is really incredible! It is so simple, so straight to the point, and so beautiful.

Amazing flow, powerful and simple imagery, just wonderful.

Means a lot to me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done. Straight to the point. I love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this write, It is very well written.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you are a very insightful young lady - i like your simple yet profound style!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I hate it when a fly gets on my back where I can't reach him with my tail to swat him away. But I love butterflies and that butterfly picture is beautiful. Us bovines don't bother with mirrors too much, but I can sure identify with the cage line! Keep it up, you will be a good writer.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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*~Kristy~*
*~Kristy~*

Williamsburg, KY



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I'm 24 years old I am a happily married woman as of April 30th, 2011 I have two kitties that I adore My husband and my little sister are the lights of my life I've been a writers since I was .. more..

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