Possession

Possession

A Poem by WickedPenWielder
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I wrote this in 9th grade and was suspended for 2 weeks. It's just part of a funny story I wanted to share.

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If I were to release you
from this prison of flesh and bone
would you forsake me for another
could you forget its you I own
smoldering embers burn you
inside out I feed
scorching you with brimsone and ash
chanting an ancient creed

© 2012 WickedPenWielder


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Suspended for your creativity....that sucks!!! Well written

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WickedPenWielder

8 Years Ago

Ah it didn't suck so much, I actually thought of it as a reward. :) Thank you Creeper!
great imagery, quite a powerful write about possession. Flows well also.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WickedPenWielder

8 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
This was a truly amazing piece of work! I love the image writing and how smooth the poem flowed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is interesting. I like it! Theres one typo at the end you might want to look at. I think its "ancient" instead of "acient" isn't it?

Posted 9 Years Ago


I can feel the emotions. love the imagery of the smolding embers.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

eloquent and :p , wimpy poetry i done think so

Posted 9 Years Ago


Possession.... is to give in completely. It's seductive and dark. We all wonder how it would feel to be possessed by another...but most of us are too scared to venture there.

Posted 9 Years Ago


possession; a thousand years has it bore that name and a thousand and shall a thousand more! we as humans weep for the wedding day which was to be tomorrow. in the sorrow we hear our souls chant, let there be release, let there be release!

really beautiful, i look forward to more of your poetry if you post :)



Posted 9 Years Ago



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I have been writing stories since I could write. Even before then I was telling them to anyone who would listen. I seem to just look at an everyday thing and my mind turns it into some type of complic.. more..

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