Possession

Possession

A Poem by WickedPenWielder
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I wrote this in 9th grade and was suspended for 2 weeks. It's just part of a funny story I wanted to share.

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If I were to release you
from this prison of flesh and bone
would you forsake me for another
could you forget its you I own
smoldering embers burn you
inside out I feed
scorching you with brimsone and ash
chanting an ancient creed

© 2012 WickedPenWielder


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MIB
I love this, for me it's the kind of poetry I like, flowing nicely and very well written, you've spent the time to write it, and it deserves a read... well done :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


really creepy but its really amazing

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Flows well! great imagery

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love this, it gives me a feeling of an ancient ritual or spell and I really like things of that sort. Very dark and in its own way, very beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great read, the somber yet flowing lines truly capture the dark and eerie essence of this scene. Looking forward to more of your writing!

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I have been writing stories since I could write. Even before then I was telling them to anyone who would listen. I seem to just look at an everyday thing and my mind turns it into some type of complic.. more..

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