Insanity

It is about the torture some people endure silently as they cry out for help but no one will lift a finger.

to die inside is worse than a graves decay

a dying spirit is not pungent nor foul

it does not showcase its self to be seen

it curls up in the pit of ones being 

sufficating them slowly and seductivly

whispering betrayls like sickened lullabys

festering like a parasite, feeding off your fear

prying and perging every beautiful thing from you

until you are left a dead cell

hollow yet consumed with real decay

decay of a demons wicked triumph

your eyes blacked

portals to where the devil resides within

screams silently fall upon deaf ears 

lost within yourself 

on a desolate isle, begging

screaming for someone to come for you

the black sea of lonelyness finally consumes you

entangling you in its bloody, barren waters

and finally you are free of purgatory, torture

the torture of your dying soul

Reviews

[Brittany]

well done. I agreed with TAKEN824 adjectives of dark and nitty...gritty...cold. I liked it.

[EYES OF MY SOUL]

Its been a while since i could read something as original as this i liked the dark and nitty detail's and description. I plan to read more of your work ....

[MOON]

Emotional dark write . Tortured souls.

[Katrina Mckeown]

well penned, vivid, descriptive and emotive write, i myself have experienced this anxiety and depression you have captured so well in your unique style of poem.
Great work.

[John Fitzgerald]

very bleak but beautifully expressed. the first line sets up the poem perfectly. I think it is important to realise no one will save you, you have to save yourself.

[light and ashes]

You hit the nail right on the head! As the saying goes. Yes I know this place well having lived through it and then come back to life. At the end of the poem the soul gives into the demons by committing suicide. For hopeless souls it is a very tempting option.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Very good. Such a horrible feeling, you get tricked into thinking it's what you want but it never is. Excellent work.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yes. Great write. I can't say I've been that lost but I have been lost and you got that feeling great here.

[RachelReaper]

I've seen this kind of insanity real and first hand, and I think you described it to a n exactness. Its a demon, and it sounds like torture. Beautiful, strange, morbid, and a lovely write on such a serious topic. Favorited!

[WickedPenWielder]

Thank you all for the amazing reviews!