Insanity

Insanity

A Poem by WickedPenWielder
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It is about the torture some people endure silently as they cry out for help but no one will lift a finger.

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to die inside is worse than a graves decay
a dying spirit is not pungent nor foul
it does not showcase its self to be seen
it curls up in the pit of ones being 
sufficating them slowly and seductivly
whispering betrayls like sickened lullabys
festering like a parasite, feeding off your fear
prying and perging every beautiful thing from you
until you are left a dead cell
hollow yet consumed with real decay
decay of a demons wicked triumph
your eyes blacked
portals to where the devil resides within
screams silently fall upon deaf ears 
lost within yourself 
on a desolate isle, begging
screaming for someone to come for you
the black sea of lonelyness finally consumes you
entangling you in its bloody, barren waters
and finally you are free of purgatory, torture
the torture of your dying soul

© 2012 WickedPenWielder


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well done. I agreed with TAKEN824 adjectives of dark and nitty...gritty...cold. I liked it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Its been a while since i could read something as original as this i liked the dark and nitty detail's and description. I plan to read more of your work ....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emotional dark write . Tortured souls.

Posted 8 Years Ago


well penned, vivid, descriptive and emotive write, i myself have experienced this anxiety and depression you have captured so well in your unique style of poem.
Great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


very bleak but beautifully expressed. the first line sets up the poem perfectly. I think it is important to realise no one will save you, you have to save yourself.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You hit the nail right on the head! As the saying goes. Yes I know this place well having lived through it and then come back to life. At the end of the poem the soul gives into the demons by committing suicide. For hopeless souls it is a very tempting option.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very good. Such a horrible feeling, you get tricked into thinking it's what you want but it never is. Excellent work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yes. Great write. I can't say I've been that lost but I have been lost and you got that feeling great here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I've seen this kind of insanity real and first hand, and I think you described it to a n exactness. Its a demon, and it sounds like torture. Beautiful, strange, morbid, and a lovely write on such a serious topic. Favorited!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thank you all for the amazing reviews!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Tags: dark, goth, dead, demon, soul, depression, insanity

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WickedPenWielder
WickedPenWielder

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I have been writing stories since I could write. Even before then I was telling them to anyone who would listen. I seem to just look at an everyday thing and my mind turns it into some type of complic.. more..

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