My Debt to Music

I'll wear your clef around my neck
and let my body be your stave

I'll paint my empty spaces with sweet rhythm
and a masterpiece is what you'll have.

I'll carry your tune in the sheets of my skin

Every note will vibrato a sound for you
and will never be forgotten

Above all the greatest things ever created
I know where I belong

I'll repay the debt of all your users dear music
by forever being your song

Author's Note

Comments and critique are valued. Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Charms]

Excellent! Being a musician I can totally relate to this one. Impressive!

[Nina Burke]

That's great, I'm glad you liked it and more importantly could relate to it.

[David Scott]

The best payment of all is to give yourself.
You promise as much and the words show a fine delivery of payment. I'm sure the music you create repays even more so.

[Nina Burke]

Thank you David, I love reading your reviews.

[Holly Mason]

very nice write
forever being your song...
nice thought
thank you for sharing

[Nina Burke]

Thanks Holly!

[keyvan]

beautiful...lovely...

[Nina Burke]

Thank you Keyvan

[keyvan]

You are welcome

[Acer]

Well written, i liked below stanza much,


Above all the greatest things ever created
I know where I belong

I'll repay the debt of all your users dear music
by forever being your song.......

nice piece truly saying. Great job you've done indeed.

[Nina Burke]

Thanks Acer! Yea, the ending flowed nicely..I appreciate the comment!!

[Acer]

My pleasure :-''), yeah, that stanza was really powerful.

[Chris]

You ran within it well.

[Nina Burke]

Thank you.

[Chris]

welcome

[The Nude Writer]

I'm not a music expert, but I love the obvious passion you put into it :) a great poem

[Nina Burke]

Thanks I did! Unfortunately so many times music is undervalued. It's important to embrace all forms of art.

[The Nude Writer]

Music of all forms is awesome :) well.. Most forms