Wicked Storm

Oh Gods darken the sky
I will not let my enemy see my mortal cry

Wicked times
wicked times

You will fear a wicked storm

I shall have no fear for the gods are on my side

The blood of your body will be my sacrifice

Oh Gods transform me to what I am within
Disperse my flesh and make me immortal again

Wicked times
wicked times

You will fear a wicked storm

My enemy I yell
I pray to the heavens but I've been to hell

When I have my avenge on your soul
You will forever burn below

You're running at me in every direction

Your breath is fogging my glass complexion

Your tears are pouring tempting the rain

There's a storm coming to play a wicked game

I will give you air or take it away

I will chase you forever or end it today

I will destine you to hell or keep you in purgatory form

Wicked times
Wicked times

I am the wicked storm

Author's Note

Comments are critique are valued. Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[soliloquy]

Well done. This is artistic and creative.

[Charms]

Oh wow! I really like this one! Perfectly done! This is a really good piece.

[Nina Burke]

Thanks Charms!

[emilythestrange]

Eleventh line it's meant to be " You're " . But very good, going on my favourites 😚

[Nina Burke]

Thank you for the review and thank you for reading! Ill edit it.

[emilythestrange]

😄

[David Scott]

The word "you" or "your" is ambiguous. Maybe intentionally and maybe not...
My eye loves that I could read this in a maze of direction. Oh yes, I think we shall respect this storm and dance and scream and shake our fist into the howling of her winds. I hope to see the spent rage as the skies clear into a night of endless sparkling stars of promise. Then the naked truth will rebirth a spirit that carries nothing of wickedness upon her.
Loved the write! Made me think of a Greek goddess.

[Nina Burke]

I feel as though I should applause your comment! Poetry within the review haha, thank you very much!!

[Acer]

My enemy I yell
I pray to the heavens but I've been to hell

When I have my avenge on your soul
You will forever burn below

Your running at me in every direction

Your breath is fogging my glass complexion

Your tears are pouring tempting the rain

There's a storm coming to play a wicked game ....

nice lines, loved to read indeed. well written, i think it' issssss a "WICKED STORM"

[Nina Burke]

Haha thanks, you know those moments when the lines just keep Rollin!