Over the Edge

Over the Edge

A Poem by Will

She dangles over the ledge
She took the step over the edge

I throw my body to the ground
And grab her before she goes down

Her eyes stare up into mine
As if looking for a sign

She asks "Why can't I just die?"
"You're too important for that" came my reply

"You need to be here," I say
"I love you, just please stay!"

She lets go of my hand
Just wanting to be canned

I can't let go of her now,
She's more than a face in the crowd

She's perfect in my eyes,
She's been hurt by too many guys

I love her more than anything
Because for her I could just sing

I need her to be here,
I need her to help me steer

I pull her up from the cliff,
My arm does a dead lift.

She's back on my side
Good lord, I nearly cried

I held her so close,
She means more than most

And now that I have her back,
Ill never let her fall through the cracks

© 2013 Will


Author's Note

Will
Not nearly my best, but I'm fighting thought some writer's block at the moment. Feedback appreciated as always.

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Awwwwwwwww! So cute!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Umm this poem sure does have a lot of meaning...I like it.So much emotion and how the charachter wont let her go, that was nice.Keep up the good work,Will!!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Tags: Cliff, death, redemption, saving, hanging, love

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Will
Will

Brooklyn, NY



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Well now that I have the patience, I'll actually write something here. I'm Will, and I'm 16 years old going on 17 , born and raised in Brooklyn, NY. I write what appeals to me. I just love writ.. more..

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