Lighthouse

You're the Lighthouse of my night,
Giving light and giving sight.

You shine bright for all to see,
and you're a role model to me.

Let that light shine on, shine on,
Never ever let it be gone!

Because if that light goes out,
I'll go out without a doubt

So keep that light burning,
And keep me from yearning

Author's Note

Kinda crappy in all honesty, but something quick for my friend

Reviews

[Adri Moolman]

Its really not crappy at all:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Not crappy at all, a very nice sentiment! If you insisted on tweaking the flow a bit, that would be OK, but your message gets through loud and clear.

[Will]

Oh I love the message, the execution is just a little sloppy. Thanks for the read and review, Rita.

[Moving Mass]

Sounds natural, looks like you actually thought this through, well done.