A Boy and His Doubts

A Boy and His Doubts

A Poem by Will

I love her
I can't say why.
The feelings burn
And my heart cries out,
For her loving touch
That I long for.

~~~

You're a fool
I'll tell you why
She won't love you
Like you will love her
You're wasting time
Pining for her

© 2013 Will


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We torture ourselves with inner dialogue like this. We would never be so negative to a friend... Very real, well done, Will.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Will

10 Years Ago

It really is the arguments with ourselves that get us more than anything else. Thanks for reading an.. read more
The title is perfect. There's the boy and then there are his doubts. An excellent inner conversation. David

Posted 10 Years Ago


Will

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, David.
Ah unfulfilled love. Is there any other kind. Fortunately there is

Posted 10 Years Ago


Will

10 Years Ago

It's finding it that's the hard part. Thanks for reading, BR
Love the separation here. Nice job depicting conflicting thoughts.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Will

10 Years Ago

Thank you kindly
Knightingale

10 Years Ago

My pleasure entirely. I'm new here and I've been enjoying the great stuff I've been able to read.
Will

10 Years Ago

You're gonna love most of what you find. Happy writing!

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Added on July 31, 2013
Last Updated on July 31, 2013
Tags: Boy, doubts, love, passion, fool, waste

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Will
Will

Brooklyn, NY



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Well now that I have the patience, I'll actually write something here. I'm Will, and I'm 16 years old going on 17 , born and raised in Brooklyn, NY. I write what appeals to me. I just love writ.. more..

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