Muck

Muck

A Poem by Will

Be careful there, girl,
you're looking for trouble
By the end of it all,
you're shell shocked; seeing double.

He's just another playa,
looking to play you.
It's the same s**t in a different toilet,
over and over, tried and true.

But you still see something in him,
a twinkle in his eye?
Maybe you're just stupid,
wanting his fingers in your pie.

But you refuse to see the truth,
to realize he's a schmuck.
So don't come looking for me
when you need help out of the muck.

© 2013 Will


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Same s**t different toilet. Too funny

Posted 10 Years Ago


Will

10 Years Ago

Yep.......
Straight talking here. Strong poem. Works well. --David

Posted 10 Years Ago


Will

10 Years Ago

Thank you David.
Still trying to figure out why she's with some low-life, eh? This one reads with a bit of a rap beat, well done with the rhyme and rhythm. Again, a clear message - keep writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Will

10 Years Ago

I've given up on figuring it out. That's one puzzle I just don't have all the pieces to solve... Tha.. read more

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Added on August 22, 2013
Last Updated on August 22, 2013
Tags: love, man, woman, boy, girl, stupidity, jerk, player

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Will
Will

Brooklyn, NY



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Well now that I have the patience, I'll actually write something here. I'm Will, and I'm 16 years old going on 17 , born and raised in Brooklyn, NY. I write what appeals to me. I just love writ.. more..

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