Forbidden Love

Forbidden Love

A Poem by Will Neill
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A love lost

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  Forbidden Love

                             A Teardrop mist on an Autumn Moon

                                     A stolen kiss gone to soon

                                 A sweet caress that longs to last

                           Leaves memories dear of a time that’s past

Will Neill.

© 2014 Will Neill


Author's Note

Will Neill
poetry is not my usual style, but this jumped into my head so here it is for what it's worth. An old post revamped
Will

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Beautifully written Will...gorgeous...Rose:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Will Neill

8 Years Ago

Rose, I am humbled you are taking the time to read my work, I will enjoy reading many more of yours .. read more
Your poetry is what I first read...the poem about your sister, Kate. I think poetry speaks a lot about the poet, if its written well.

Keep them coming, Will!


Posted 8 Years Ago


Will Neill

8 Years Ago

Kelly, I in myself do not claim to be a poet and I can not expect to be as talented as yourself, how.. read more
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ron
Very nice. You put a lot in those four lines. I liked it a lot.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Will Neill

8 Years Ago

Thanks Ron.
Will
Loved the rhyme, its short yet so nicely penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Will Neill

8 Years Ago

Thank you Cassie (what a lovely name) for your comment.
Will
You painted an extremely visual and concise story in just four lines of well scripted rhyme.

Lovely, Will. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Says a lot in a few words, it is wonderful when words just seem to fall in place...

Diane

Posted 9 Years Ago


Will Neill

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Diane.
Will
I'm used to your stories by now. I like this a lot but can't help imagining a story behind it and I got to tell you, oh what a story it is.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Will Neill

9 Years Ago

thanks for reading all my work.
Will
A fine piece of work Will. Perhaps you should try your hand at it more often?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Will Neill

9 Years Ago

Thanks Shane, If more pops into my head then maybe, other wise I will leave to you guys.
Will
Lots of emotion packed into those few lines...you said it well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Will Neill

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Frieda.
Will
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

My pleasure Will, I enjoyed it.

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Will Neill
Will Neill

belfast, United Kingdom



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Will Neill is an award winning Irish author, poet and amateur musician; Born in Belfast in the late fifties. Will has established himself as a prolific writer all over the world for both his prose and.. more..

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