'Icicle'

                                 ' Icicle'

                    A winters Poem by Will Neill

Silently Growing

Clear soft Water

Antique rain from frozen clouds

Clinging unevenly from every height

Glass fingers dripping slowly

Alive by darkness grace, comes the morning

Sunlight's Kiss, delicately melts a winters face

                             Will Neill

                               2013

Author's Note

A short winters poem.

Reviews

[Beccy]

Delicately wrought; absolutely my kind of poetry.

Beccy.

[Solar]

'Antique rain from frozen clouds' a beautiful line in a beautiful poem!

[Will Neill]

Thank you, I had forgotten about this little poem, it was nice to read it again.
Will

[Woody]

a little beaut. where you find the right words and beautiful imagery, I'll never know.
A true poet and artist, Will.

[Will Neill]

Engluva, Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Will

[Woody]

you're most welcome.

[Stephen]

Words're adorable cus, what the light you shed on your poem's extremely marvelous reading. It's been great to read poems to me but this poem looking very interesting one.

[Will Neill]

Stephen,sorry it took so long to reply,but thank you.
Will

[ashesonfire]

I really like the "Antique rain" line. Very interesting thought. I also like the "glass fingers dripping" part. Very pretty, and flows very nice. I feel like your very last line flows the best. A very perfect ending to this poem. :D

[Will Neill]

Thank you for your kind words and I am glad you enjoyed reading.
take care
Will

[ashesonfire]

You are more than welcome!

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

A lovely write with vivid imagery. I especially like 'antique rain.' Great piece!

[Will Neill]

Sharon, you are so kind to take the time to review my poem.
Thank you
Will

[Jack...]

Will, this is so beautiful. I love "antique rain". This was soft and soothing and oh so cold my friend. Perfect description of the beauty of winter.

[Will Neill]

Thanks Jack,I'm just blowing in and out at the moment, but I appreciate the review.
Will

[Gedalya]

Possibly the best ending line I've seen tonight.

[Will Neill]

Gedalya, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
Will

[Gedalya]

Possibly the best ending line I've seen tonight.

[Frieda P]

This is elegant and enchanting, this icicle took on a life of it's own. Being kissed by sunlight was it's demise but you did it so delicately. Just beautiful.

[Will Neill]

Frieda, Many thanks for your kind words.
Will