Secret Place

Secret Place

A Poem by Will Neill
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We all have our secret place....dont we?

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Secret Place


Deep within my mind I keep

That secret place where I don’t weep

Of precious memories and our fleeting life

loves first kiss and newborn life

A caress that lasts a thousand years

The Joy and sadness of children’s tears

Fingers touching as we sleep

Knowing we can never keep

Secrets which would end our fears

Will Neill 2021

© 2021 Will Neill


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Good rhyming and good meter. Indeed, we all have, and need, a secret place.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Will Neill

9 Months Ago

Thanks John . Will
The most precious of our memories are not for public display. So precious are they, we keep them hidden from view, to be recalled at our leisure. Meaningful lines Will. A delight to read something new from you. All the best.

Chris

Posted 9 Months Ago


Will Neill

9 Months Ago

Thanks Chris, something new on here, yes. My musings are more concentrated elsewhere these days . Ta.. read more
I really enjoyed reading your poem and it has a lot to say about the memories we keep. Their preciousness and value to our hearts in the peace they bring. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

Posted 9 Months Ago



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Added on August 29, 2021
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Tags: fears, romance, lies, deceit, love

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Will Neill
Will Neill

belfast, United Kingdom



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Will Neill is an award winning Irish author, poet and amateur musician; Born in Belfast in the late fifties. Will has established himself as a prolific writer all over the world for both his prose and.. more..

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