A girl that dreams

A girl that dreams

A Poem by WillaDanvers
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Frustrations at work do a poem of suffering make

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Teeth clenched and spirit storming, 
A love of hatred building, 
The need for redemption hidden, 
Waiting to strike, a moment unsuspected, 

Only young, but expectations piled,
Only learning, but mistakes a fould she doth make, 
Thrown down and stomped upon repeatedly, 
When she dared a question to ask, 

The need to leave building upon day, 
Struggling in a position others don't understand, 
Frustration boring holes in her sanity, 
Seething with helpless anger, a silent death made, 

Half the reason of her suffereing, 
The treatment of a child to bear knowledge, 
Decades in the field only a year to gather, 
His actions and words bring her heart to hate, 

A passion she holds, a flower to never die, 
Staying here, a flame that cannot live on, 
Stuck between choices, for her or to dream, 
The question of a broken sanity, or home to be, 

A slow and painful death of dreams, 
Twirling arund the head of a child, 
Waiting for her chance to shine, 
Though the constant shame of shadows thrown at, 

Small town hopes and dreams eager to please, 
Those that feed a mouth and supply the roof, 
To create a future to support the life of, 
A girl with dreams dying today.

© 2017 WillaDanvers


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It is sad when our dreams die. A interesting story leading to the sad ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WillaDanvers

5 Years Ago

It is sad indeed. But at the same time, we need not let one person control our love for a dream. Man.. read more
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are right my friend. But we see life with new eyes when our life changes. You are welcome.
I could relate to this. Scared of not meeting their expectations.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WillaDanvers

6 Years Ago

A terrible feeling
DEEPLY moving and poignant poetry.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WillaDanvers

6 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on August 31, 2017
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Tags: Work, Suffer, Hate, Love, Flame, Flower

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WillaDanvers
WillaDanvers

Auckland, New Zealand



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I am a part time poet, who's words sometimes ring true but otherwise have only gathered information from music, stories or a singular feeling. Anything really. Enjoy the words, and leave a few kin.. more..

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