Remember

Remember

A Poem by Savior of Time


Don’t let me forget


            the color of your eyes


I find them so beautiful


 


Don’t let me forget


            how you feel against me


I love it so


 


Don’t let me forget


            the sound of your voice


I hear it harmonizing with me


 


Don’t let me forget


            how sweet your lips taste


I feel it linger on mine


 


Don’t let me forget


            how much I love you


I can’t live without you.


© 2014 Savior of Time


Author's Note

Savior of Time
~11/24/2014~

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I like the repetition of the poem. One thing I would encourage is to remember that with such a short poem, each word holds a lot of weight. Try not to let any word be filler or wasted. Use the most powerful word to express your message. Just a thought.

Overall, I really like this piece. Nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago



Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

196 Views
1 Review
Added on December 19, 2014
Last Updated on December 19, 2014

Author

Savior of Time
Savior of Time

FL



About
* Was Willatree3 * Just a weird 14-year-old Theatre geek living life. I'm an actor (as you could probably tell), dancer, volunteer, and writer (hopefully, you got that one). My favorite genre to read.. more..

Writing