A Poem by Savior of Time

Don’t let me forget

            the color of your eyes

I find them so beautiful


Don’t let me forget

            how you feel against me

I love it so


Don’t let me forget

            the sound of your voice

I hear it harmonizing with me


Don’t let me forget

            how sweet your lips taste

I feel it linger on mine


Don’t let me forget

            how much I love you

I can’t live without you.

© 2014 Savior of Time

Author's Note

Savior of Time

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I like the repetition of the poem. One thing I would encourage is to remember that with such a short poem, each word holds a lot of weight. Try not to let any word be filler or wasted. Use the most powerful word to express your message. Just a thought.

Overall, I really like this piece. Nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on December 19, 2014
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