How love feels

 

I have always been a glass half full kind of guy

and maybe even a little bit more than half full

Regardless, as long as there was something

sitting in a glass even close

to that imaginary line,

I knew how to make it enough

 

So tell me why now as I look

I see the glass as completely empty…

 

when you’re not around

Reviews

[s y e]

Awwwww, just wait until she is back and the glass will rise again and your smile and heart will be complete again. You're so cute and sweet.

[Ana B.]

It is not empty, just waiting to be fulled. Great job Will. :)

[willweb]

Thank you Ana, so very much.

[Confuser]

All of your optimisim lost. I thought it was great - you do so well with writing poems of love, but this really isn't about that at all and i like that too. Thanks again. Dale

[willweb]

Thank you Dale once again for your kindness.

[Confuser]

Y/W..................................Dale

[R Smith]

missing someone huh Will, the glass is half full but true love is a test that's hard to pass when its gone away, great writing as usual :)

[willweb]

Thank you my friend. It always nice to have you visit.

[AprilRN1210]

I can relate to this sorta... I know how certain people make me feel with just their presence or their voice.. just knowing they are there.. you did a nice job explaining that emotion... well done my friend.. not really a half empty kinda girl, more like one regular drink and one fuzzy fizzy one at times:)

[willweb]

That's funny...not into the fuzzy fizzies too much, but I know what you mean. Thanks so much April

[Dannyisawriter]

Really well worded! Good job

[willweb]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

A sad statement, Will. I hope she will be around a lot, so you can become happy again. But sometimes, you're right, love feels like this. :) Rudi

[willweb]

Thank you Rudi. In some cases all it takes is a few minutes for this feeling to set in.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

I know the feeling... :) Rudi

[The Black Warrior]

This is a great description of how loves feels Will, been away from the one that we love, can make us feel so blue! :) wonderfully done my dear!

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Suk for always being so nice to me.

[The Black Warrior]

You are very welcome Will! :D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sometimes we compromise, capitulate, acquiesce, accept someone but they don't love themselves for their flaws and bail out, leaving us wondering why.

[willweb]

Thanks again John. This was more about missing someone, but I like your take on it.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Oh how I have missed your poetry. The glass may seem empty but it will always be full of memories and the love shared. Wonderful piece yet so sad. Geez ... Your need to be happy... I am back for a bit so let's party a little. Lol

[willweb]

I am happy, I'm just hiding behind this frown so the sadness doesn't find me. :) Thanks so much Kalypso.