And then

 

And then the sun came shining through

the haze and morning mist

Warming up our springtime view

with golden sunbeams kissed

 

And then we walked the garden path,

such beauty there did grow

You whispered that you loved me true,

you’d never let me go

 

And then you took me by the hand

my heart it skipped a beat

When right before the daffodils

our two lips came to meet

 

And then we lay atop the grass,

your body warm and pure

So happy just to spend the day

with one I do adore

 

And then you gazed into my eyes,

a look to me to send

Exactly what you had in mind,

I pulled you close and then…

Reviews

[Cassie]

awww this is such a warm piece of writing that makes me feel like it is incomplete, there should be part 2 of this

[Chris Shaw]

This is such an uplifting piece of writing. Flows well, nicely rhymed and ideal for a spring Sunday morning with the sunshine flooding through my window. And to top it all it has a happy ending, or at least it did in my mind. Thank you.

Chris

[willweb]

Thanks so much Chris. I appreciate your visit and kind words.

[mattavelli]

Hello, Willweb! :)
You nailed the rhythm on this, and you gave it a happy ending. Haha
I haven't written anything in a while, but after reading your poetry im feeling the urge. Thanks for sharing.

[willweb]

Thanks for reading and commenting. Happy writing...

[Unspoken poet]

This is such a lovely read, very well expressed

[willweb]

Thanks so much, glad you liked it.