Songs in the key of romance (Acrostic)

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Inside the longing as deep shadows dance

Lost in the passion of you

Offering songs in the key of romance

Violins heard right on cue

Endless this rhythm of love on display

Yearnings melodically free

Orchestras waiting for their turn to play

Until you are here with me

 

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Reviews

[Dilan Gray]

This is beautifully written. I love the rhythm of your words.

[willweb]

Thank you again. I am thrilled you liked this one.

[Dilan Gray]

You’re welcome!

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my good friend .. beautifully done .. best acrostic award from me .. i am in love again and would read this to her any day and time .. good stuff says i!
E.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much my friend. I appreciate your kind words.

[Wondering Mind]

Lovely..
Acrostic form is a challenge to deliver the message within and without.
You did it

[willweb]

Thanks so much. I am thrilled you liked this one.

[Chris Shaw]

Such a beautiful acrostic will. Wonderful sentiment with a message that would brighten up many a dull day. A true romantic you are. Haven’t tried one of these for a long time.

Chris

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome. Have a great day will.

[Lorry]

I have only ever tried one acrostic, a 26 line one called the a to z of life, while suffering from lack of sleep.
Amazingly I finished it so quickly, that I immediately went to bed and slept all day.
I was convinced it would be mince, but after my eyes refocused, it turned out to be quite impressive, so I retired from them immediately!
I do hope I still have a copy of it somewhere, or it might keep me up all night again 😊
Yours however is succinct and sticks to the label on the tin.
Snappy, rhythmic and hopefully has the right lady all a flutter and making goo goo eyes at the thought.
I used to be quite good at making ladies go all goo goo eyed. Now all I see in there eyes are "I'd probably be out in five for good bahavior!" 😊

[willweb]

Yeah, I guess so as long as there is not a sale at the nail salon again (which it seems like there is) So, no, no googly eyes pointed in my direction.

[Lorry]

I just found it. Thought I'd lost it as there was a house fire. Just to prove I could write more than 4 lines, once along ago 😊

ABC of life (Acrostic)

After a life of living
Bemusedly for the majority
Clarity is a welcome release
Discovering sense briefly

Elegantly sidestepping chaos
Figuring out pieces of the puzzle
Gaining insight where there was none
Hope to the hopeless

Imagination runs away
Jousting with my sanity
Keeping me guessing
Leaving only more questions

Maybe the point of it all is
Not to expect there being a point
Only fools think they know
Pretence the same as ignorance

Quantifying existence
Removing possibilities
Sharing knowledge
Tripping on worn paths

Universally speaking
Vision doesn’t always see
What is in front of us
X rays can’t see through lead

You are uniquely you
Zipping through the unreal real.
. . . . .

[willweb]

Very, very cool. I like that. You know what I did first...let me see how he used X. : ) You should put it out on the site where many can see it....hardly no one will see it here.

[Lorry]

I stopped reposting old stuff a while ago, as I have a habit of deleting them, which I think I'm now cured of. I am still quite impressed how it turned out so well. Watch this space 😊

[John the Baptist]

A well managed acrostic here. The longer they get, the harder they are to handle.

[willweb]

Is that a challenge? : )
Thanks John