Sunset artistry

Sunset artistry

A Poem by willweb

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I caught the moon
peeking over the eastern
horizon as the sun was
painting the western sky
in vibrant colors

I guess the moon loves
a beautiful sunset too

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© 2024 willweb


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A tale of natural romance and beauty. Maybe the sun is an appreciator of art or a voyeur watching the sun undress. Oh my maybe this tells too much of me. Oh well Will this was clever and most artistic any way you look at it. Loved it

Posted 1 Month Ago


Both sunsets and sunrises can be exceptionally beautiful
I often look at the beginning of 'Lawrence of Arabia' just to watch that shot of the morning sun cracking the wide, flat, desert landscape.
I see Texas is getting hammered these days
Hope you are making out OK.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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mou
Beautiful thought! Truly, we are surrounded by miracles and beauty. You've drawn the imagery with a fresh touch of imagination! I love to read these types of poems so much. Lovely!
- mou

Posted 2 Months Ago


willweb

2 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind response to my poem. I appreciate your time and your nice thoughts
You have captured the very essence of sunset in this sublime write, dear Willweb. Beautiful picturization throughout the poem paints all the colours of evening time for your reader. The moon (Luna) loves the sun (Sol) and after all this time he is still amazed at the magic she displays just before it is time for him to appear in our night skies. Lovely work, dear poet! Thank you for sharing...

Posted 2 Months Ago


willweb

2 Months Ago

Thank you so very much Marie. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Marie

2 Months Ago

I loved it, dear Willweb and thank you again for sharing... Enjoy a very lovely evening...
I really really like this one, though I struggle to put my why into words. I use the word "evocative" all the time, but this one certainly is. Perfectly composed.

Posted 2 Months Ago


willweb

2 Months Ago

You must like beautiful sunsets too. : ) Thanks John
John Sullivan

2 Months Ago

Anytime, friend.
A very imaginative poem dear Will. You remind me of the profound effect the beauty of the solar system has on our psyche. Our thoughts revolve around it so often and they are replete with such deep symbolism.
The sunset you painted is breathtaking with both the sun and the moon in the scape and would elate the most downcast soul. Great Poem!

Posted 2 Months Ago


willweb

2 Months Ago

I appreciate you Divya. Thank you my friend.
DIVYA

2 Months Ago

It was a joy to read,my friend. You're most welcome.
Oh woww, so beautiful,
"I guess the moon loves
beautiful sunsets too" most definitely since they were always lovers.
-Amy

Posted 2 Months Ago


willweb

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much Amy
Amy R

2 Months Ago

You're welcome.
this should have so many more reviews....so many more.

Your poetry gives a concert on each page.

Posted 2 Months Ago



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Added on May 17, 2024
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Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things. I enjoy maki.. more..

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