Deity

Deity

A Story by Bill O. Writes
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From a couple years ago.

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She came down from the skies. Her blonde locks floated gently around her while light radiated from her on her descent. White garments draped from her body like a waterfall of satin. Angels were just a fairy tale to him but there she was defying every ounce of doubt.


In anatomical position, with her head up leaving just the underside of her chin visible she crept closer. Lowering so slowly all he could do was watch in awe. His mind was entranced by this still faceless beauty. Her elegance was unimaginable. As she hovered closer his goose bumps raised shattered him. He felt his pores opening up as if to accept this wonder into his own body.


Why she was here, he didn't know. The only thoughts in his mind was her beauty and how undeserving he felt he was to see such a sight. She was now almost close enough to touch when she came to a halt. Hovering there with her light still illuminating everything around them both she reached out to him with a slightly cupped hand. She brought her head down so he may now see her face and all he was able to do was softly gasp. He was taken away by her raw beauty.


She was nothing short of perfection.


Her hand still reached out in waiting he was compelled to close the gap and reach back.


Contact


Their skin touched for the first time. It was no surprise that her perfect image was complimented by her pillow soft palms. With no intention of ever letting go he grasped firmly to her hand. She then turned around. He felt a slight tug on his arm and then felt his feet leave the ground. He didn't know where they were going but he didn't care.


They drifted higher and higher towards the sky. He had no idea where she was taking him but it was all okay. She only looked back once to him, and smiled...

© 2014 Bill O. Writes


Author's Note

Bill O. Writes
This is not a religious piece.

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its beautiful and I'm so glad its not religious, feels like she came to take him to an afterlife but not the life expected in religion, I'm a great believer in afterlife without religion so I guess thats what I see in your story, a fine piece of work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Bill O. Writes

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! Yes you can be spiritual without religion. Seems we are on the same page!



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its beautiful and I'm so glad its not religious, feels like she came to take him to an afterlife but not the life expected in religion, I'm a great believer in afterlife without religion so I guess thats what I see in your story, a fine piece of work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bill O. Writes

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! Yes you can be spiritual without religion. Seems we are on the same page!
That's really good :D The way you've written it sounds almost like poetry in my mind.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bill O. Writes

7 Years Ago

Thanks! I'll have to give you a review too! :)

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Bill O. Writes
Bill O. Writes

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