Rx

Just my take on medicine for our psyche and what it does to our minds

Everyone has something that they cant conceal

Do you take the pill

or learn to deal?

Chemicals hinder who we can truly be

what you have to provide

 the world won't see

Line them up in a little blue line

Every day as prescribed

One at a time

With every pill you fight to digest

You sit alone

your thoughts suppressed

"When will I need to stop"

you asked the doctor today

"After those thoughts go away"

Yet here they are

They still remain

Your liver is scarred

while you decay

Author's Note

I don't take meds. This is just a personal belief that everyone should be able to be themselves without worrying that it's a "disorder"

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

As a nurse, I am torn on this subject and can argue both sides.. for the most part, I have to say I agree with this.. but there are exceptions to this of course....the flow, meter, and rhyme were all pleasant.. the lines concise and meaningful flawlessly flowing to the next while the flow aided in the momentum, the building up of intensity for your knock-out ending.. those last two lines pack a pretty powerful punch... really well done.. I always enjoy reading your work...

[Bill O. Writes]

And I always enjoy your deep and insightful reviews :). Thanks again, April! Always happy to have you like what you see.

[AprilRN1210]

you're more than welcome sir... it is honestly a pleasure...

[Deandra Dawn]

Very very true. Drugs cloud the mind and kill creativity and soul. Loved this.

[Bill O. Writes]

Awesome that you agree! Thanks for another review!