OLIVER

OLIVER

A Poem by Windy
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My unexpected but very welcome newest grandson.

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A tiny being, A huge event

A gift of love, A baby "meant"

 

This child born into the night

Has finally set their world aright

Rare are miracles (so people think)

Yet there he is all new and pink

 

He lies there all wrapped in blue

His eyes of brown glance around the room

For now content, yet later he'll cry

And there Mom will be, Dad by her side

 

Happy and proud, a Family they'll be

As night turns to day

The precious ones sleep

© 2008 Windy


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beautifully penned windy.. you bring to light family values in such a manner that your words embrace the reader
in way of expressing what it means to be cherished..as you love those close to your heart.. this writing paints
a picture in detail.. texture.. showing the treasured moments of looking at something as wonderful as a newborn welcomed to the family.. and what a joyous experience to behold in all subtly.. such things tend steal the
moment in blissfulness..this writing has a lulling effect in thought. Nicely penned

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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O!
Nothing more beautiful than a lil baby...

congratulations grandma ...i feel the love.

x,
O!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, you are so sweet! What a good grandma! Very beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was too beautiful! You can feel the love that went into this poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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beautifully penned windy.. you bring to light family values in such a manner that your words embrace the reader
in way of expressing what it means to be cherished..as you love those close to your heart.. this writing paints
a picture in detail.. texture.. showing the treasured moments of looking at something as wonderful as a newborn welcomed to the family.. and what a joyous experience to behold in all subtly.. such things tend steal the
moment in blissfulness..this writing has a lulling effect in thought. Nicely penned

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oooo, I can feel the pride oozing from the poem, it's soo cute. Very well done, and congrats as well!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful expression. Absolutely content..all the planets aligned. My fave I think.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great!
Wonderfully penned,
Great flow and rhyme...
I loved it!

And how sweet it is... a new baby..... yay!
Yay for we grandparents because we can hold them...
googoo... cuddle.... all that cute stuff,
and then give em back when they cry. lol!

loved it! thank you :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a joyful read, it made me grin and smile... that's what words are supposed to do.. so, you won me over by the end of the second line.

The subject of course, is a winner, the emotions are delightful, it's a gem.

As the reader below says, we all learn about the technicalities as we go along. Read published books, read other people's work on here... it all comes eventually. In the meantime, play with styles - if you want, then use whatever you're most comfortable using.

Thank you for sharing such happiness.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reminds me of my new grandson who I have yet to meet. Nice poem the words flowed beautifully, a sweet pleasure to read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is a cute poem :) I like the way that it is simple but a lot is said with a few sentences. I enjoyed reading it! Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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