Monarch Twinkle

Monarch Twinkle

A Chapter by WinterPerish

Monarch twinkle,

monarch scars,

journal razors,

journal stars.

~

The blood falling isn't a sin,

the ink does inspire.

But doesn't describe the pain within.

~

They judge her,

she's under hard attack.

The camera lens clea,

but don't they all see,

it's blurring to black.

~

Te lies they shove,

rumors they spread,

don't you get it?

She's just afraid to love.



© 2011 WinterPerish


Author's Note

WinterPerish
For a friend of mine :)

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Interesting iambic rhythm. I like how it flows

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Very nicely written.

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nice flow, great detail

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I like this one, the flow is gentle.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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WinterPerish
WinterPerish

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Writting might me more than an escape for me. An addiction. I have a connection to my journal, I almost feel guilt when I don't spend time writting in it. My pen and I have a bond. I use is whenever .. more..

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