Monarch Twinkle

Monarch Twinkle

A Chapter by WinterPerish

Monarch twinkle,

monarch scars,

journal razors,

journal stars.


The blood falling isn't a sin,

the ink does inspire.

But doesn't describe the pain within.


They judge her,

she's under hard attack.

The camera lens clea,

but don't they all see,

it's blurring to black.


Te lies they shove,

rumors they spread,

don't you get it?

She's just afraid to love.

© 2011 WinterPerish

Author's Note

For a friend of mine :)

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Interesting iambic rhythm. I like how it flows

Posted 10 Years Ago

Very nicely written.

Posted 10 Years Ago

nice flow, great detail

Posted 10 Years Ago

I like this one, the flow is gentle.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on June 26, 2011
Last Updated on July 16, 2011
Tags: monarch twinkle, poem, love, hate, scars, razor



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