Chocolate

Chocolate

A Poem by ❀ Gabriela ❀
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A poem about chocolate. Sort of.

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I'm not a fan of chocolate, 

I think it tastes like dirt. 

 It smudges on my finger tips 

 And leaves stains on my shirt. 

 
My friends cannot believe this. 

 "Impossible!" they say. 

 Amid their looks of horror, 

 I quickly walk away. 


 I'm not a fan of chocolate. 

 That's fairly odd, it seems. 

 It keeps me wide awake at night. 

 It haunts me in my dreams... 


 I try, so hard, to take a bite. 

 I cry and choke and spit. 

 I really start to wonder: 

 How can people eat this... stuff. 


 And while I gaze at cake displays 

 And dream of what could be 

 I'm not a fan of chocolate, 

 And it's not a fan of me...

© 2016 ❀ Gabriela ❀


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I like it, I like it, I like it! It's funny, witty, whimsical, and every line packs a good punch (even that throw -off where we know you're going to say a dirty word, but censor yourself). Well freaking done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


favorite bits: "stuff" when the rhyme tells us what you really meant, I wonder what "it's not a fan of me" means.

Have you tried nutella?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very amusing and musical. I really like this one. I read Mispelled too: they both have this interesting playfulness in them. (:

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


 ❀ Gabriela ❀

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the reads/review!! :) Glad you liked them both! :D
WHAT?! Lol :) I don't agree with you, but I did love the poem (if that makes a shred of sense...) Great job!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


 ❀ Gabriela ❀

9 Years Ago

Hehe :D Thank you!! Glad you liked it :)
Funny and clever. I really like this poem.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 ❀ Gabriela ❀

9 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Glad you liked it, I had a lot of fun writing it!!

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