Summer's Gone

A plot twist in 100 words.

Her ponytails bobbed behind her as she darted through the flower beds. Pausing for breath, she leaned against the ivy-covered wall and gazed up at the sky. She breathed in the smell of freshly cut grass and smiled. She could stay here for hours. 

"Emma?"

Peals of laughter rang out as the others caught up, and- 

"Emma!"

She awoke with a start, laughter still ringing in her ears. The teacher glared down at her sternly. 

"Emma, do you have anything to say for yourself?" 

"Yes," Emma replied flatly. "Next time I have geometry class, I'll remember to bring a pillow..."

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

This is a great story, giving the reader a peek into the thoughts, feelings and dreams of a student, especially early in the semester, when warm, bright lazy days are such a recent memory. Weaving the laughter of the class into laughter in the dream-Creative! Your story is a great example for short stories. I enjoyed reading it.

[❀ Gabriela ❀]

Thank you for your kind review, and for reading my work! I'm glad you enjoyed this :)

[emipoemi]

Your prose is just as good as your poetry. I love this! It's short, sweet and witty! Well done!

[Marie]

This is clever. Poor Emma--dreaming, or trying to dream, of the summer gone past.

[❀ Gabriela ❀]

Thank you! :) Glad you liked this!