(Im)patience

(Im)patience

A Poem by ❀ Gabriela ❀
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Patience was never one of my strengths...

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Patience is truly a virtue
Albeit, one I have yet to acquire.

I could never wait to pull out a tooth;
I would yank the thing out with pliers!

Taking turns, or worse- waiting in line,
Are two other things I would scoff.

And, to be terribly blunt,
I still rush to the front
And cut everybody else off!

Ah, yes, patience. It's definitely something
that's been lost to my brain.

Now, don't take me wrong
(My, this poem's getting long!)
It's not something I wish to attain.




© 2016 ❀ Gabriela ❀


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I like It's definitely something that's been lost to my brain. Thank for sharing. wondeful poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love the rhythm of this poem! it rhymes beautifully well done :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


 ❀ Gabriela ❀

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much!! Glad you liked it! :D
I liked this. So true you could be writing about me.
When the brain works faster than the world around us.
Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


 ❀ Gabriela ❀

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind review!! I'm glad you liked it! :D
Nice
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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 ❀ Gabriela ❀

6 Years Ago

Thanks!! :)
dim wit

6 Years Ago

np
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Very cute! Though not waiting your turn is not playing nice, your poem made me laugh.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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 ❀ Gabriela ❀

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :D
Very good writing! This poem was a great satirical read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


 ❀ Gabriela ❀

8 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :)
This was really hilarious! I liked the little "twist" there at the end...funny.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is brilliant. I feel the same about lines. and poems... Finally a poem that gets it beautifully in words

Posted 8 Years Ago


haha, this is a quirky little poem. i like the rhyming, and the words too - patience is, after all, a very important thing in life. great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very clever funny write.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on March 11, 2012
Last Updated on January 7, 2016
Tags: Impatience, Patience, Humor

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 ❀ Gabriela ❀
❀ Gabriela ❀

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