Gentle Sunlight (After the Rain)

Gentle Sunlight (After the Rain)

A Poem by ❀ Gabriela ❀
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A poem about the beauty of spring showers and sunshine.

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Sunlight

A glimpse, a glimmer

Sweeps through the parting clouds

Every bright and golden shimmer

Gently warms the dampened ground.


Sunlight

Trickles, dances

Through the canopy of trees

It coaxes every bud to wake

And warms each quivering leaf.


Sunlight

Glowing, gleaming

Breaking through the shroud of mist

Beckons the earth to awaken

With its soft and warming kiss.






 





© 2015 ❀ Gabriela ❀


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Very Sunny indeed! And the rhythm was done superb. Reminds me of watching the sun rise up over the mountains with my grandparents. Takes me back to happier, sunnier days. Beautiful!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


 ❀ Gabriela ❀

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D
Love it!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Makes me think of a green glass bottle just sort of hanging out in the rain, til the sun makes that color.

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing poem.
I really like the way you present the sunlight and tell a story of how it fights its way through clouds, leaves and mist to the ground, taking the reader along on its journey, to bring warmth where it is needed. There is a hopeful note to that thought.
Wonderfully written!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


a new dawn shinning a rainbow that is so sweet, you are very capturing with your words, i enjoyed your poem.

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Posted 9 Years Ago


well this just makes me feel great...lovely poem

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Added on March 12, 2012
Last Updated on April 24, 2015
Tags: Sunlight, Spring, Showers

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