No Escape

No Escape

A Poem by ❀ Gabriela ❀
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"A loud, angry shout. A furious scream. It replays in your mind like some terrible dream..."

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A loud, angry shout.

A furious scream.


It replays in your mind

Like some terrible dream.


But there's nowhere to run,

And nowhere to hide.


It breaks you down slowly,

And kills you inside.


It eats you alive,

And it tears you apart.


Every scalding, hot tear  

Burns a hole in your heart.


Irreparable damage

Is left in its wake.


And the worst thing of all?


There is no escape.

© 2013 ❀ Gabriela ❀


Author's Note

 ❀ Gabriela ❀
Trying my hand at writing darker/more serious poetry. Please tell me what you think! :)

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The rhythm and flow is great in this piece. It's just non specific enough that each reader will relate to it from their own personal experience and identify with your words which is one of the aspects of writing that authors hope to attain. Dark, but a good read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


 ❀ Gabriela ❀

3 Years Ago

Thank you!! :)
This is beautiful and I love the line
Every scalding, hot tear
Burns a hole in your heart.

I wish you good luck :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


 ❀ Gabriela ❀

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Speak in Silence

7 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
This poem flows beautifully, the rhyme seems so natural. And you definitely hit the mark in terms of writing something that is dark. I really enjoyed this. The meaning was clear and well written! Good job!! Keep writing!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 ❀ Gabriela ❀

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it! :)
It is very dark. You did a great job! Haunting feeling I get from it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A poem is truly good when it changes your emotions, and you have definitely done that. Wonderful work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 26, 2012
Last Updated on June 8, 2013
Tags: Fight, Fighting, Nightmare

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