Thought

Dreaming that she could be saved, when in reality, she couldn't see it...

She told herself she was alright

But she was telling white lies

Scared to admit the truth

She kept it on the inside

Thought no one cared

'Cause no one listened

She was being driven by lies

Those cuts on her wrist were no mistake

Cause no one cared to save her from this self-hate

She can't believe that it went this far

But she just plastered on a smile

Acted like she was happy

Waiting for her time

Her time to take that jump 

Ending it all

Letting those people that lie smile

She tried to fit in

But this world is full of sin

She couldn't live

She was misplaced

Now she is gone

But don't be sad

She is in a better place

No sin there

Author's Note

Love Y'all <3

Thanks for Reading!

Reviews

[LM]

Aww this makes me sad. Your writing is very intriguing and im so easily hooked. I feel horrible for the person you are writing about. I know a lot of people that felt this way about themselves and some grow and see the beautiful people they are and let no one ever tell them their value or nake them feel inferior and some take their life before they even come to that realization. So i like how you expressed that perspective.

[iamshadowine]

"Now she is gone
But don't be sad

She is in a better place
No sin there"

loved these lines! :)
keep writing :D

[Valentine]

Taking ones own life is a sin. Many were picked on and battered growing up. Struggling to survive this makes one stronger than the bullies. Try talking to Jesus. Valentine

[sinNsincerity]

So sad.
Who is this about if you don't mind me asking?

[Starr]

Yea I know..... Me... me and my bad life, i lost so much

[sinNsincerity]

Just no that you are not alone and as long as you write about it- it will all get poured out and touch those who feel or have felt the same.

[Starr]

Thanks you so much! I understand that in some sense. Thanks so much again~

[sinNsincerity]

Always. Just do be so hard on yourself. People already kick us when we fall. You don't have to add more fire to it. Stay strong!

[Starr]

Thanks so much and yes I know, I have a rough life like right now... But thanks again so much! I will try!