Uneducated Fantasy

Uneducated Fantasy

A Poem by WordNerd

One of the ill effects of cruelty is that it makes the bystanders cruel


Bells ring violently in the air

Punches burning the bodies that care

School walls bleeding out words of pain

Fear flows rapidly thorough your veins


Teachers watch, as the students turn grey

Innocent hearts screaming for a way

Lockers glaring with rage

While identities are trapped in a cage


Black tears cutting down the cheek

Doors closing for the freak

Scars of bullying never hide

It jumps off the skin; committing suicide

© 2011 WordNerd

Author's Note

I hope this is decent.. :S

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Oh, I HATE bullying. And it happens to both of my older girls. I've had to contact counselors and principals. And they're not freakish or anything, kids just seem to have gotten overly mean these days. It's horrible!!

The poem was really meaningful, and if you couldn't tell, I identified with it right away :) It is frustrating that even when there's supposedly zero tolerance policies other students, and sometime even teachers just look away because they can't be bothered. And it saddens me even more that those who are doing the bullying and having their "fun" don't realize how much damage they're really doing. Great write!!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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I totally agree and every word jumps off the page at me. It's true this is the effects of bullying in schools. great write! ^^

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EXCELLENT! This hits hard as it should do! Powerful love, really good! xx

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

are you kidding? decent? this is amazing! your word play is terrific and it flows as gravy over mashed potatoes. great write!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on May 26, 2011
Last Updated on May 26, 2011



Toronto, Ontario, Canada

I'm a Nerd, who is an avid reader with a peculiar attraction to Literature, specifically, Fantasy, Mystery, Sci-fi, Comics books (Marvel comic books), Manga and Horror. I solely write poetry, how.. more..


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