He's Gone Now

Heart is aching,

Water falling,

Hands are shaking,

Feels appalling.

Closing eyes,

Streeming down,

Tears you're crying,

He's gone now.

Author's Note

All feedback is appreciated

Reviews

[Kenaz]

Lovely and short. Good rhythm to it as well.


streeming>streaming.

[Jetta Zippora]

Raw emotion here. It's powerful. Love the simplicity of it, friend. :) Beautiful.