The Leaves in Fall

The Leaves in Fall

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Just a short little poem I came up with off the top of my head. Its a metaphor between the leaves in fall and a sad one-sided relationship. I don't really write poetry very much, but I hope ya like it

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Like the leaves in fall I fell for you
What a mistake that was though

Like the leaves in fall you swept me aside
Leaving me behind like all the others

Like the leaves in fall I disappeared with winter
But I gained something from this one-sided love

Like the leaves in fall you must look through them all
To find the truly beautiful ones

© 2012


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Very well written my friend....I enjoyed this.....Whisk

Posted 9 Years Ago


aw this is so beuatiful and sweet, enjoyed reading this write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is short and sweet.
Very nice metaphor indeed.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good choice with the metaphor, fall draws a very poetic picture

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohmygosh, I truly love this!
I think you're a great writer from the look of this :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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